I've discovered the words "was", "would", and "could" muck up a story
I've discovered that I have run into a pattern of using the words was, would, and could when writing my novel.He was walking to the store.
It would be better if he did it himself.
If only I could have seen it coming.
I've read so many books where sentences like those above are common place.
Since I am the kind of writer who rewrites everything one hundred times, I've discovered how much time I've lost by using these same types of verbs. They are sedentary verbs. That means they just sort of sit there but they don't do anythng exciting.
He walked to the store.: I can see that.
Have him do it himself. : Dynamic,
Why didn't I see it coming? : Makes you want to cry.
I love rewriting. It's actually my favorite part of writing.
now a days we need new idea every day to make things interesting.....
BalasHapusi loved the way they used creativity did good performance....
BalasHapuswell done.keep it up.continue future with such amazing performances....
BalasHapusi think depending on situation we need to use the words....
BalasHapusi dont need to tell you but rather than thinking about using this and that words .it is better to make sentences a meaningful one
BalasHapusi would like to learn some sort of english from you .you seem to be good writer
BalasHapusyou have lot of patience to write all those things.i would rather hate
BalasHapuscan we see some of your writings? your english is good
BalasHapuswe got good knowledge through the post.thank you for educating us
BalasHapusif we change one word the total meaning of the sentence would change
BalasHapusi want to learn english from genuine writers like you.it would be interesting to learn english from you
BalasHapusi am not good at english ,so i am learning it by reading newspapers ,blogs etc
BalasHapusbut i never read the words you mentioned above.it would be used only in hard sentences
BalasHapuswhile writing novel use the words which come commonly,so that it wold be good to hear as well as understand.dont think you are using this and that
BalasHapusit is important to focus on what you are telling to people rather than what words you are using in novel
BalasHapusas a author it is your responsibility to show present good novel which also bring positive changes in them
BalasHapuswhen i was kid i was interested to read famous novels
BalasHapusyou are trying to write novel with out using the words? want to see once u finish writing.
BalasHapusi used to be seeking related details.i could not necessarily identified anytime other than the following
BalasHapusappreciate for sharing the post around
BalasHapuswould like to see your future novels .are you trying to eliminate would,was and could from them too
BalasHapuswhat is the problem in using those words? why you hate to use them?
BalasHapusif you use all the words ,then your writings can be done very easily.
BalasHapusi am not that much perfect like you to write any thing with out use of such words.you are a genius :)
BalasHapusthank you for sharing your thoughts on english.
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